The
Enlightenment Protocols Book 4 - Redemption
Tales
of the tribes of the Central Metropolitan
Regions
as told to the Sol-Earther
Don
C. Ciers by Commoners of Draaken.
Authorized
for release by G.W. Morgan,
Commodore,
Commonwealth Combined Fleet
3/29/2012
Copyright
© 2012
Pages:
303
The
ongoing saga of the battles between the god-fearing Commonwealth of Stellar
States and the Alliance of Stellar Republics faithful to Pygan continues in
Book 4 of this series.
The
Alliance had forcefully taken over the Aipian and Paileni tribes but the
inhabitants were not prepared to accept either their rule or to bow down to
their god. Commonwealth Recondo teams infiltrated the Questri-Shontor binary
region to learn not only about this resistance movement but also if they needed
help from them. The Recondos found out that major cities had been destroyed and
the people were losing hope.
With
first class weapons, equipment and communications systems on both sides, their
clash begins in the Cerberus Gap. In the early stages of this battle, both
Commonwealth and Alliance forces quickly used up the majority of their
firepower. Alliance fighters, under orders from Mistress Indira-Vin, eagerly
awaited backup and as they waited, they suffered severe losses of both
equipment and manpower.
Aboard
one of the Alliance’s Tantorian destroyers, Tribune Flavius and his officers
saw the damage first hand with “so many others electrocuted in front of them
(as they sat at their consoles); some of their bodies had yet to be removed
from the ante-room next to the deck elevator; the ventilators struggled to turn
over the atmosphere on the command deck. The smell of burnt wiring and
insulation mixed odors with burnt flesh and loosed bowels, urine and sweat.
Surviving primary system operators were afraid to touch their consoles.”
At
the same time, the Commonwealth's Praetor issued orders to continue the
assault, which even some commoners found shockingly "hard-hearted."
Both sides suffered casualties as they maneuvered to avoid swirling dust,
asteroid fragments, vapor clouds that obscured vision and ‘mined zones’ that
screened the enemy's “bombardment fire pockets.”
The
Commonwealth's bombardment capability soon fell to around 30 percent. Then all
pilots, navigators and gunners heard “the bugle notes of the centuries old
Sandoran cavalry charge” known to all “sports fans and cinema buffs” on the
Commonwealth worlds. Instantly, they renewed their bombardment of medium range
missiles on the Alliance ships. When Alliance reinforcements finally arrived,
they returned fire with their deadly Darts and Mighty Arrow missiles.
As
this interstellar war continued, “Search and Rescue squads” scrambled to
recover “pilots ejecting from disintegrating fighters and bomber craft in
illuminated protective (metallic) cocoons.” These “Angels of Deliverance”
picked up pilots from both sides. As one fighter put it, “nobody deserves to be
left out” in the void of space to die. Captured enemy pilots were “grateful to
be brought safely aboard anyone's craft.” However, they knew that becoming a
Commonwealth prisoner brought a much better fate than falling into the hands of
the Alliance.
This
battle also takes to the ground on Aipian-Contagor'e with continued action and
more horrible deaths as both sides attempt to maintain superiority.
In
prior books of this series, there were many problems with spelling,
capitalization, sentence structure and more. This fourth effort overall is much
cleaner with only sentence structure continuing to be an issue. The author has
proved to be more than willing to learn and to correct these items so further
continued progress should be seen as the series continues.
The
author continues to exhibit expansive knowledge of ships, weaponry and military
tactics throughout. The only other comment that should be made is that given
the fact that this series involves a multitude of tribes on various planets,
one would think that they could not all be humans. However, there is no hint as
to the specific species of these tribes, physically or otherwise.
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